You could make it a place, like the Bermuda Triangle or Oregon's Vortex.
Tanning booth
Scuba gear
Jacuzzi
Coffin
Elevator
Meat locker
Train
Fun house
Necklace
Chair lift
CAT scan
EDIT: @Kirsten. Okay... So that was both sad and exceptionally silly. While I'm sure we all appreciate the sentiment, I politely disagree, and I hope you didn't think this opinion of yours would hold any impact on how she feels about what she's doing. I can't see why it would, it's just smoke. You do realize that there is more to writing than just the objects that influence it, right? Heard of mystery? Heard of characters? And there is nothing wrong with asking for help if you're stuck on something trivial like this. There is honor in charity, so just answer the question next time instead of acting like a douche and trying to make a person doubt the worth of their own existence. It's extremely petty. Now go hug a puppy or something, I can feel your deepseated unhappiness from here.|||Thanks Amanda. I hope she didn't make you feel bad at all. A premise in a work of fiction is the point you're trying to prove, like an argument in an essay. It's an idea that drives the plot, so unless she thinks your premise is that "Tanning booths lead to time travel", she is completely wrong...
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|||...in thinking that you're asking us to come up with your premise. A premise would be more like "To be free you must be strong", while it may not really be true, it's true for the situation of the story. So what she's saying holds no weight simply by being completely absurd.
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|||That's not writer's block. It's laziness. How can you ask other people to come up with the central premise of your story? You don't sound like much of a writer.|||a refrigerator
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